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Below is the poem entitled Surrender which was written by poet Paula Swanson. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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To feel the rain upon the soul,
an effervescent whisper.
It speaks of calm, serene control,
which lies within surrender.

Quenching the thirst of the heart.
That need of the unspoken.
Then drifts along, becomes a part
of tears that mend the broken.

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  1. Date: 4/26/2013 3:32:00 PM
    So beautifully written. The clarity and messages you write are wonderful.

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 1:24:00 PM
    Great write. Loved it. Loved the metaphors and imagery. Talented Jen

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 9:45:00 PM
    Great! I love it!

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 9:13:00 PM
    A beautiul poem..It speaks to me..thank you. BG