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Surrealistic Symphony

SURREALISTIC SYMPHONY With the new light From the rising sun Let it warm you as my love like a sweater that I spun And may your everyday begin Where your lovely dreams do end And every time you close your eyes May they all begin again You’re like a supernova I’m blinded by your brilliant beams No place can claim you contained before bursting at the seams This time I refuse to quit I’ll give it everything I got But disregard my greatest deeds for they could do you justice not You’re my favorite musician In your eyes I hear a song A surrealistic symphony makes my sad soul sing along So turn your love light on And flood this melancholy place Cover up the scars and stories that time has carved into my face Now I can think of no occurrence When my words have rang more true Then when I use that old cliché, the simple statement “I love you”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/24/2011 5:37:00 AM
Well done, you've dug deep for that one. your imagery and metaphor are really nice here, the meter is a pleaseure, a joy to read, thanks for sharing.
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