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Surfing In Hawaii

In spite of the snow, in spite of the cold I'll be surfing in Hawaii, such joy untold Well maybe in dreams Hear girlies cute screams Dreams, my friends are much richer than gold

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Dm Babbit

Date: 4/5/2016 2:45:00 PM

I get so much accomplished in my dreams. That includes surfing, skiiing and who knows what else. Nice write.

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/5/2016 4:51:00 PM

Uh... (d)reams!!! LOL

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/5/2016 3:48:00 PM

I'm an amazing Adonis known the world over... in my reams!!! LOL

Tim Smith

Date: 4/5/2016 11:51:00 AM

You'll be out there hanging ten...soaking in the rays and then....chase the cuties....not the fruities...in a couple years you'll be sayin, I remember when

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/5/2016 2:27:00 PM

Glorious days ahead!!!!!!!!!