Surely-

Surely... You see the pain in my eyes Surely...you know its there Surely... you know that this smile is fake Surely... you don't care Surely... you'd try to comfort me Surely...you'd hold me tight Surely... I'd never expect that from you Surely... we are about to fight Surely... one day I will open my eyes Surely... one day i'll be gone Surely... I'll just make excuses for you Surely... you will always prove I'm wrong

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/6/2016 9:41:00 PM

Sara, thank you for the reply

Skat A

Date: 2/3/2016 10:39:00 PM

Hi Sara,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Sara White
Date: 2/4/2016 8:05:00 AM

thank you so much for the kind words, and im looking forward to sharing our talents! xxs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/3/2016 4:29:00 PM

Deep verse Sara, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Sara White
Date: 2/4/2016 8:07:00 AM

thank you linda, I cant wait to share my experiences and see the talents and experiences of others! :) xxs