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Supernatural Cold

When God sneezes it's a lightening show Because when lightening flashes it is not slow Thunder clashes and the clouds they show Gods nose is running but pure is the flow Some may say God doesn't catch colds But if God can get angry why can't he catch colds Some may say what are his symtoms When clouds are grey and thunder grumbling all of a sudden a sonic boom and a flash of light you can't tell me that's voluntary so lets just call it a sneeze

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Date: 5/1/2023 6:29:00 AM
We may never really know what causes thunder and lightning, but it is fun to wonder about it... I enjoyed reading your poem this morning, John. Very creative and thought-provoking!
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Date: 10/30/2015 6:26:00 PM
Dear John What do you say to God if he sneezes, that's my question after reading this one, I'm not trying to be smart just asking an interesting question at least to me? Love the poem it is thought provoking, and the imagery is marvelous my friend seriously, it's very good. Thank you also for the comment on my adbuction poem, the subject matter appealed to me alot so I went with it, cheri
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Date: 10/18/2015 3:25:00 PM
What a very funny piece....I burst into laughing as I read it end..a seven for this powerful piece. excellent..........A.M.
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Date: 10/14/2015 7:08:00 PM
Imaginative write. Bravo
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Date: 10/12/2015 9:15:00 PM
Lol, yeah I agree :)
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