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Ignoble though our dawn of days, yet intoned is worthy praise of legion minds whose reasoned grasp has ever roared at starry heaven’s distant vault—Omniscience’ mighty pillars to confound. Yet I hesitate and wonder, if we alone proud mantle don to reason and opine, or whether listens now on curved space’ strange and distant shore an ancient, brooding mind who jots it all on pages of a tiny book it is writing about us. Seventh place in the Let's Get Technical Contest

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Date: 4/18/2018 5:47:00 PM
Wonderful poetry dear Mark :)
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Date: 2/19/2016 2:29:00 PM
Marvelous language and imagery! '...I love both verses... this deserves much more than seventh place. BRAVO Mark! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 7/29/2014 2:14:00 PM
Mark, Congratulations, in Andrea's "Let's Get Technical contest:)" Loving life's how it goes.... LINDA
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Date: 7/27/2014 5:44:00 PM
Congrats on a great win, Mark my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/27/2014 4:10:00 PM
An intriguing concept. congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 7/27/2014 4:47:00 PM
Joyce, thank you so much for taking notice. I treasure each comment.
Date: 7/27/2014 12:43:00 PM
Mark, this poem sure has a smart tone to it. It had kind of a classic tone as well. I usually am more drawn to modern sounding poetry, but I have to admit this one is very nice, and the ending really wows me. Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 7/27/2014 3:48:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for hosting this interesting contest. I found the theme to be challenging and worthwhile. Thanks for honoring with a top ten placement. I look forward to your next one.
Date: 1/27/2014 9:11:00 PM
Wow, you put me on the floor with this one. Not only with the content, but with the words and flow. Great rhythm. Great thoughts.
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Date: 1/27/2014 11:08:00 PM
Thanks, Roy, really great comments for me from this other point of view.
Date: 11/21/2013 1:27:00 PM
inferior are we to the task we have been given. it's always physophical but the distraction "the flesh" flexes it's superiority and then we lie.
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Date: 11/21/2013 2:07:00 PM
Alas, how many species are but a footnote in the galactic directory. Your words hark to Carmina Burana: "... I entangle myself in vice, forgetful of virtue; greedy for pleasure more than for salvation, I, dead in my soul, attend to the needs of my flesh." Thanks John, for thoughtful reply.
Date: 11/7/2013 12:12:00 PM
As a society / Ignoble as we be / We cannot look / Within that book / yet know our destiny. I wonder what motivated this deep poem of yours.
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Date: 11/7/2013 12:42:00 PM
Thanks Jon. I can't get deeper than the holes I dig for myself. I believe our destiny is greater than we can imagine.
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Date: 11/7/2013 12:31:00 PM
Intelligent life in ascendance 10 billion years ago would know everything, given the rate that knowledge is acquired, i.e., witness our advance and the forthcoming technological singularity. In light of this it is hubris to believe that what we know now, comparatively, would fill any more than a tiny book.
Date: 11/2/2013 12:04:00 PM
I agree: very thought-provoking. I am thoroughly enjoying myself as I peruse through your poetic portfolio. I'm adding you to my "favorite poets"; I think your work is just that good :)
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Date: 11/3/2013 10:21:00 AM
Very humbling to hear; thanks, Mark; the sentiment is much appreciated, my friend :)
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Date: 11/2/2013 8:07:00 PM
Oh, my, I am overwhelmed. As for this poem, most can't figure it out, but now I am among poets. You're on my favorite list as well.
Date: 10/28/2013 12:12:00 PM
Mark, this is poetry. You made my day. I read this poem twice until I could confounded your praise for those minds that look Up! Friend, JM
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Date: 10/28/2013 2:20:00 PM
Hi Joe, good to hear from you. Thanks for spending the time to work on this poem. I'm very gratified that you appreciated it. Heaven knows I worked on it hard enough. Mark

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