Super Star

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This poem is about a 21 year old super model as seen through the lenses of the photographer.

Camera engaging Strictly amazing Focusing bring it in. Spinning grinning Beautiful motions Black suede skin Picturesque, patient, persevering persistently Photogenic Super star No scars Long limbs Black swan Posing however delighted Super star Touch the sky Excited Clicking flicking whirling twirling Brand and smiling styling. Girl in, a world of her own Mystic bones Her alone Catwalk it The camera is her home Personality astounding Youngstar shinning brightly Defining Attitude divining

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Skat A

Date: 8/16/2015 12:39:00 AM

Hi Val, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soup's home page :). **SKAT**

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/18/2015 11:49:00 PM

Nice pen Valerie! enjoyed your super star piece, dear friend. In his light! God bless you! I wish you a very lovely day! :) D."

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther
Date: 2/19/2015 1:14:00 AM

Thank you Dorian for your critique. Have a great week. VB Rogers

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/18/2015 10:12:00 PM

ooo Is this about me... LOL... JK... delighted to read this my friend. "Girl in, a world of her own Mystic bones" fascinating line. :) you should make something like this your own form. Enjoyed stopping by this awesome rhyme-nation poem... LINDA

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther
Date: 2/18/2015 11:39:00 PM

You're funny Linda. All poems are of fictitious people. Thanks for your compliment, Linda.