Sunshine

Tell me you'll be there forever By my side Promise me you'll wipe away The tears I cry The tears I cry for you The tears that kill me inside The tears for you The tears Tell me you'll be my friend My one and only Promise me you'll love me Forever and always Tell me your secret To life Promise me that you'll Never lie Be my sunshine Be my rain Just be there for always And never change Tell me you'll always in your heart stay true Promise me you'll always love me too Just tell me Tell me Just say it's true May 14, 2008

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Patricia Langston-Moran

Date: 11/27/2008 5:05:00 AM

Kristin. Thank you for answering me and thank God you realized in time and did not do this terrible thing. I think perhaps we have all, at one time or another, been in such dispair that we might have 'thought' of it. Good for you. You thought of your loved ones first. He was too agonized, I guess. If only he had reached out to me, I would have gone to him. Thanks for your concern. Love, Patricia --------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Derrick Burton

Date: 11/27/2008 1:54:00 AM

beautiful poem, and you are good with your feelings. looking forward to reading more.