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Sunset Tears

melting colors cry psychotropic dripping tears blush on heavens cheeks
11/18/15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/26/2015 7:12:00 PM
A unique description of a sunset! Congrats on your win, James! Love, Kim
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James Inman
Date: 11/27/2015 6:55:00 AM
Thank you Kim.
Date: 11/24/2015 10:11:00 AM
One of my favorites right here!! Hope you have a wonderful thanksgiving, my friend. Unless I find a computer between now and Sunday, this is probably my last time here this week! Congrats on your win here.
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James Inman
Date: 11/24/2015 10:38:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, have a wonderful Thanksgiving!
Date: 11/24/2015 4:27:00 AM
James, CONGRATS! On your sweet SunSet win. LOVE SKAT
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James Inman
Date: 11/24/2015 9:00:00 AM
Thank you SKAT
Date: 11/23/2015 9:04:00 PM
Great job! Congratulations on your win!
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James Inman
Date: 11/23/2015 9:17:00 PM
Thanks Eve
Date: 11/23/2015 11:54:00 AM
well written, James. Congrats to you.
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James Inman
Date: 11/23/2015 12:12:00 PM
Thank you Lin.
Date: 11/23/2015 10:32:00 AM
True romanticism, James! Congrats!
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James Inman
Date: 11/23/2015 11:09:00 AM
Thank you Balveen. I love your comments.
Date: 11/23/2015 10:15:00 AM
Lovely imagery, James. Congrats on your win. Sandra
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James Inman
Date: 11/23/2015 11:08:00 AM
Thanks Sandra.
Date: 11/23/2015 9:46:00 AM
Congratulations James.
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James Inman
Date: 11/23/2015 11:07:00 AM
Thank you Nayda, and thanks for another wonderful contest.
Date: 11/19/2015 4:07:00 PM
wow, so picturesque, Ralph. vERY nicely done.
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James Inman
Date: 11/22/2015 12:04:00 PM
Thank Andrea
Date: 11/19/2015 12:15:00 PM
such lovely imagery James good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/19/2015 12:54:00 PM
I was too late for the contest - guess I could have entered an old poem I wrote when I first joined the site:-( hugs Jan xx
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James Inman
Date: 11/19/2015 12:52:00 PM
Jan, wasn't sure about the word psychotropic. It probably could have been better, but nothing else I can think of expresses the mind altering effects of a beautiful sunset and the way the colors change and shift changing your mood as you watch it.
Date: 11/19/2015 10:13:00 AM
very cool haiku love how the last line brings it all together
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James Inman
Date: 11/19/2015 12:48:00 PM
Thanks Nathan.

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