Sunset

Sunset Liquid gold...molten in the water's sluggish hues of blazing embers. 1.7.2017©deborah burch Form: Monoku

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Date: 1/11/2017 11:49:00 PM

Brilliant monoku! :) Beautifully written -JWE

Deborah Burch
Date: 1/12/2017 11:19:00 AM

Thank you JW!! :)

Date: 1/10/2017 2:51:00 PM

Very nice, Deb. I like Monokus and all the coo's:) It is fun, trying to get all that beauty, in a few words

Deborah Burch
Date: 1/10/2017 3:08:00 PM

Thanks John!!! Thank you for your visit!! Big Hugggs!! Deb

Date: 1/9/2017 8:28:00 AM

I'll take two please! And a side of fries... ;-). beautiful ~ john

Deborah Burch
Date: 1/9/2017 10:22:00 AM

Lol!! Thank you john!!! Biggest Hugggs!! ;)

Date: 1/8/2017 10:20:00 PM

Ah, so beautifully poetic, Deb:)

Deborah Burch
Date: 1/9/2017 10:23:00 AM

Thank you Daniel. Big Hugggs. Deb:)

Date: 1/8/2017 5:42:00 PM

How gorgeous!!

Deborah Burch
Date: 1/8/2017 9:39:00 PM

Thanks Andy!!!:)