Sunset

burning horizon- Evening Star appearing, as maize harvest dries

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Constance La France

Date: 9/30/2016 1:37:00 PM

Teddy this is beautifully penned and congratulations on your win ~

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/30/2016 4:07:00 PM

Thank you so much BW, for your warm applause!! *^_^*

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/29/2016 10:44:00 PM

Teddy, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my latest Blog "Beautiful, But Fragile" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/30/2016 2:33:00 AM

Thank you so much Linda, for your kind applause!! *^_^* <3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/18/2015 7:49:00 PM

Good one. I liked the way the last line related to the first.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/19/2015 7:54:00 AM

Thank you so much Andrea! *^_^* I remember one time you had advised about haiku writing. Thanks so much. Have a lovely evening. It's 5 pm in Kenya. Maybe I should say "have a good day?" lol.

Skat A

Date: 11/18/2015 4:57:00 PM

Beautiful and warm....luv Skat

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/18/2015 5:28:00 PM

Thanks Skat! *^_^*