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I don’t want this to end, don’t want to end up alone
Seeing the beauty of the sun and the bluest sky come together before night
My mind at grace my smile showing through the frail frown
Colors collide ever so blissfully I am in harmony 
Hope this feeling will never fade away
I don’t want to be left in the darkness to come
Wish the sunset would stay forever at this moment
This is one moment I love to gaze into the sky
With love filling my heart sorrows turn away
Air is calm and breezy just like a good time at ease
Every time I see that sunset
I will know there is still hope for me
And when the sunset goes away
I will be safe into night
Cause I have faith with love
And with the sunset I will shine like the stars in the sky

By Brian O'Toole
 Poem for Leonora Galinta Contest-Sunset

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  1. Date: 8/20/2013 9:20:00 PM
    a sweet win Brian....congrats... love ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 5:13:00 PM
    Brian, a beautiful sunset poem ... congratulations!! PD

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 5:25:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win my dear friend Brian. Thank you so much for your very spectacular and outstanding poem. I love it so much and so enjoyed. Thank you so much as well for your full support. Have a blessed day! Big hugs! Love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 8:34:00 PM
    Wonderful expressive piece best wishes in the contest! Laura :)