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Sunrise's Painting

Gently, light touched my eyes As it tickeled my thighs… A soft breeze entered my door A melody played across my room…. A heart beat was heard As a new day approached…. Lowly, I opened my eyes, Where a beautiful view was in display… A view birds can't wait to see… A view where life begins to speak… I rested my eyes that morning, on the sunrise's beautiful drawing... The drawing that displayed a harmonious painting, of red, orange, yellow, and the people who are smiling…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/13/2008 3:13:00 AM
I love your writing.....so positive, so full of love and color, a regular garden of smiles. Love, Daver
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Date: 9/11/2008 10:26:00 AM
Pretty picture. It is those little moments that are important in one's life. Each sun rise and sun set should be enjoyed as life goes by so rapidly. Vince
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