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Sunlight

Last night, the doors of dark entrapped me Oh, capricious sunlight!…. His naps exceed his wiles Deliberately he comes and goes Leaving me bereft, and sobered to his moods I batter hard against the night until my knuckles bleed But I can not summon the sun to hurry up another day He takes his time, as if it is all a game This is the wait, …between the antics of his display Last evening he made his great departure, With amber clouds to frame his face Without a pause, ignoring once again the earth’s applause and admiring eyes In one blink of an eye…we watched him leave Wearing red shoes, and colorful hat woven through with gold He gets lost below the curved rim of the world And when the curtain is closed, we hear a sigh behind the hills And all is still, Companioned by a dark serenity And I must welcome darkness as my friend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/19/2011 5:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Sunlight" Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/18/2011 11:37:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your big win in the contest----kashinath
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Date: 4/17/2011 10:08:00 PM
The last line is an icing on this beautiful art. Heartiest congrats for this win.
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Date: 4/17/2011 5:12:00 PM
Ahhh the path less traveled rich and pictureque! Yummy with sensory input! Congrad's on your win. Light & love
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Date: 4/17/2011 2:39:00 AM
Carrie, quite an amazing write, congratulations on you second place win.. This brought a smile to my face, love Wilma
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Date: 4/16/2011 11:32:00 PM
so fine, fine, carrie.. …happy cheers to you for the special win :) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/16/2011 6:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your second place win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 4/16/2011 2:54:00 PM
I'm honored to share second place with this amazing poem. Congratulations,Carrie.
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Date: 4/16/2011 2:50:00 PM
Congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/16/2011 2:11:00 PM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Carrie
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Date: 4/16/2011 1:11:00 PM
sent you soupmail :D
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Date: 4/16/2011 12:32:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your super win in the Sunlight contest ... exquisite entry my friend.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 4/16/2011 11:51:00 AM
This is another example of why you are one of my favorite poets..the last stanza is so great. BG
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Date: 4/16/2011 11:46:00 AM
You have your own unique style, Carrie, that is such am amazing talent. This is another sensational piece of writing. Many congrats on your BIG WIN Lainie
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Date: 4/16/2011 11:35:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on a well deserved win...luv Michael
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Date: 4/16/2011 10:58:00 AM
Super congrats, Carrie ^_^!! this was another unique take on the challenge- I totally enjoyed how you personified the sun here with red shoes too, love that! You've painted such an interesting & vivid picture here and how you ended this was just awesome! Soupmail later :)
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Date: 4/16/2011 10:14:00 AM
What a beautiful salute to sunset and Sun's hiatus. Congratulations on a super win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/14/2011 10:08:00 AM
Wow! Really like the way the sun battles with darkness in this poem, Carrie! The sunlight seems to have an "attitude." Very cool entry for the contest and I wish you success. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/14/2011 9:04:00 AM
Magnificent Carrie. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/14/2011 7:17:00 AM
Ahh! Old Sol is old, and very wise. He knows full well that absence makes the heart grow fonder! And, he always keeps the promise of his return:) I love your poem Carrie, good work!
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Date: 4/14/2011 12:47:00 AM
Amazing poetry from you Carrie.Best wishes--kashinath
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Date: 4/13/2011 6:53:00 PM
As you know, Carrie, Personifications are my favorite form of poetry. This one is magnificent. Top-notch entry girlfriend. Also wish to thank you for your ever-so-kind comments on my poem. Lainie
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Date: 4/13/2011 2:20:00 PM
Such a delight to read a warm and touching write, your poetry stands alone my Dear Carrie..love Michael
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