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Sunday Poet

Fresh scented pines towering over me Rest and sweep sweet summer noises Buzz and dance with glee Crickets sing forever, a beat so wee Needles of green Running water a poets dream Musty smells, the old church bells chime and lullaby Cool breezes, autumn teases nearly blowing by Ponds of peaceful waters I sit here on these wooden quarters Dragon flies dressed in colors so bright blue- That rest upon the shapely stone, then flew Into a wonderland of lush gardens Burnt amber birds stopped by, I beg your pardon For here I watch nature, as she spreads her carpet so free Of wild twisted branches and escaped flowers with a bee Sunday hours of liberty Dressed in suits and skirts, high society Golden rods that flex across the path And there, chirping, a baby bird takes a bath Lily pads float so gentle and dwell- A poet’s spell, filled with serenity As I breathe in my identity Here on this dreamy summer Sunday

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/12/2008 4:10:00 PM
I hope you enjoyed writing this one as much as I have enjoyed reading it. So beautiful, fun and uplifting. Well done. Love Heidie
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Date: 8/11/2008 12:42:00 PM
What warm and wonderful visuals you created here. Each verse is a brushstroke on a masterpiece of poetry. The flow is easy and it's such a wonderful write. Michael
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Date: 8/11/2008 8:39:00 AM
Feel like I stepped into a fairy tale. Breathtaking in its beauty. A real wonderland the miracles of nature. Expressed so eloquently. A joy to read. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/11/2008 8:08:00 AM
You paint a picture of the perfect Sunday. Such a day would refresh and restore any poet's soul! I do believe, however, that you could write beautifully about any day of the week! Lovely poetry! .....Fondly...Carrie PS. Thank you for reading mine, and for your encouragement.
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Date: 8/11/2008 12:15:00 AM
Beautiful writing Laura,one for my favourites list I think.Rgds Brian & thanks fo your welcome comments
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Date: 8/10/2008 8:37:00 PM
fresh scented pines, never better than that, and then when it rains on the pines it is ever better. this was a very beautiful poem. thank you for reading my Passing through life and for your comments on it.
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Date: 8/10/2008 6:43:00 PM
Hi Laurie, this poem was beautifully constructed, take care D-nyce
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