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Sun Shafts

The cumulous arrive in train; with thrusting breath that reeks of rain, a roiling moody, leaden pall, to shroud the world in shadow-fall. Thunder grumbles; muted flashes, rain with sting and wind with lashes, a blanket, nebulous, intends, for blue to meet ignoble ends. When all seems lost and Sol's retreated, in evidence he's not defeated; a shaft of sunlight tells the wary, the veil's only temporary. 2-11-13

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Date: 2/12/2013 6:22:00 PM
Ahh, as long as we have that shaft, there is hope. Good look on contest.
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Date: 2/11/2013 9:11:00 PM
Nice poem. Good luck.
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Date: 2/11/2013 8:40:00 PM
this is a well crafted poem of couplets on the topic for that contest. I wish you good luck.
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