Sun-Moon

the sun moves up high strong as ever, burning sky feeling warmth, it’s light moon travels along rays coming down from above cool to the touch, bright the sun and the moon work together hand in hand morning and the night Russell Sivey Entrant into Linda-Marie's "HAIKU HODGEPODGE ..TRIO ..." contest 1/19/2012

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Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/5/2012 5:14:00 AM

Russell, Well done. Congrats on your win............S.Ronthorpe

Spandan Karmakar

Date: 2/2/2012 2:44:00 AM

Congrats Russell on your win in this contest.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 1/31/2012 4:38:00 PM

congrats on your win in the contest, I like the closing image of the sun and moon working together hand in hand, well written :-)

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/31/2012 2:31:00 PM

Nicely done, Russell. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/31/2012 8:52:00 AM

beautifully done, congrats on your win Russell

David Williams

Date: 1/31/2012 1:12:00 AM

Russell congrats on your win,..David

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/30/2012 8:45:00 PM

Congrats on your win for this superb haiku, loved and enjoyed, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2012 4:05:00 PM

Hmmm, how did I miss this one before? Well, good thing I got to see it NOW. Congrats on your win, Russell. this is a cute haiku.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/30/2012 1:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your super win in Linda-Marie's "Hodgepodge Trio"contest Russell. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/30/2012 1:35:00 PM

congrats Russell on success in my contest.. an excellent entry luv.. thankxxx...

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/21/2012 2:30:00 PM

Your poem spells the magic of each, our sky is what was created to hold them.

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/20/2012 9:03:00 PM

The sun in the day and the moon at night. That is a combination everyone knows is right. Good write Russell.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/20/2012 6:59:00 PM

Gotta love that last triplet the most, Russell bc it brings the rest of your piece full circle..reminds me of Louis Stevenson with the ending tone..gorgeous write. Gwendolen

Don Johnson

Date: 1/20/2012 6:37:00 PM

sun and moon together, hand in hand , morning and the night... great words of poetry here.....

Jack Horne

Date: 1/20/2012 3:08:00 PM

Lovely haiku, my friend

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/20/2012 2:20:00 PM

This was a pleasant poem Russel,enjoy it. :)oxox love Anne-Lise ps.good luck in the contest!!

Brenda Victoria Northeast

Date: 1/20/2012 11:48:00 AM

I meant to mention i love the line ' Strong as ever, burning sky', Bren

Brenda Victoria Northeast

Date: 1/20/2012 11:45:00 AM

I love poems about sun and moon- thank you Russell all the very best in contest. And thank you for your kind comments to my work, Bren : )

Judy Ball

Date: 1/20/2012 8:56:00 AM

Nicely done Russ. By night we are bathed in the silver glow of the moon and by day we are warmed by the sun. Good Stuff. God Bless, JB

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/20/2012 5:11:00 AM

Enjoyed the contrast of the two lights or should I say one light and one a reflector..Good luck in Linda's contest..Reads like winning material to me..Those Hersey's Kisses are a great little satisfying little taste of chocolate for sure..Thanks for stopping by and thinking of leaving one..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/19/2012 10:14:00 PM

Russell, i like to think the sun and moon one day will collide and make the best sight ever... good luck in the contest..p.d.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/19/2012 9:50:00 PM

i like how this blends in the midst of a study in contrast approach, russell... ratin it ' A ' for amazing.. winning huggs! whoo..:)