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Sun In - Sun Out

Extreme Sunset Brimstones past the clouds Highlight against the ocean line Beautiful sunset, warm texture Warning, the rooster's asleep! Glorious yellow and orange mixture My source of great inspiration Unmatch - beauty mark In the sky The horizon is ready for nightfall ~*~

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David Smith

Date: 6/28/2016 5:17:00 PM

I admire anyone who can describe something a new way that is unique to them. Regards David from NZ

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2016 4:10:00 PM

Another one that I really like, Skat. I wonder if there are some of these I have seen more than three times now!

Hailey Comet

Date: 7/5/2015 2:26:00 PM

Really short and sweet. You made a great mental picture here with nice word choices. Thanks for this read.

Robert Lindley

Date: 3/29/2015 8:20:00 PM

I saw this as a winner before reading comments below congratulating you on it winning! A7 and awesome deep and creative poetry.

Logan Holliday

Date: 3/27/2015 9:11:00 AM

Amazing imagery.. Love it!

Anna Hopper

Date: 3/12/2015 1:38:00 PM

Lovely image in my head

Anthony Beesley

Date: 2/21/2015 6:06:00 PM

Brimstone and a burning wind

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 2/1/2015 3:53:00 PM

SKAT A, I love the element of surprise in the last line of each verse! Very awesome piece with blazing imagery! Pandita.

Nick Armbrister Jimmy Boom Semtex

Date: 12/1/2014 2:11:00 AM

nice. many images from nature and the sky come to mind here. :)

Cherl Dunn

Date: 6/12/2014 9:14:00 PM

Beautiful my dearest girl, love how light this is i'm thinking I need to do something light and easy such as you've done here. I wonder what you have inspired tonight lol one never knows dearest of hearts where this may lead me. But it would have started by your muse above. cheri

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/22/2014 5:44:00 PM

skat you should rework this one somehow for the red moon contest I still love it.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/17/2014 2:54:00 AM

Hi Skat...stopped here to read one of your poems in exchange for Dracula visit!!:) (only following sis's instructions!!) Glad I did though...the imagery here is great...so is the whole write :) cu // paul

Skat A

Date: 4/11/2014 10:31:00 PM

THANK YOU ANDREA :) SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/11/2014 9:53:00 PM

hot win... linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/11/2014 1:40:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win in: "Itty Bitty" contest, Skat !! (My poem was so itty bitty that it dropped out of the contest :))) - Have a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 4/11/2014 8:41:00 AM

Congrats on your win Skat

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/10/2014 10:50:00 PM

this was very nice, Skat. Like I told Tim, I put the good ones that forgot to put itty bitty in the title line down here. Others did not make the list at all. congrats in my contest. Your poem rocked.

Sandip Goswami

Date: 3/12/2014 10:32:00 AM

Beautiful...I saw it on the coast of Bay of Bengal...Best wishes from India...

Greg Fabre

Date: 2/19/2014 1:36:00 PM

Hey Kat, this is subway67. I'm not too familiar with how this site works, so I'm sending you a message via comments. Thanks for your comment and friendly, warm welcome to poetrysoup. I will have to figure this site out. Red Sun is very liberating. Let myself float away with it. Thanks again for your post.

Robert Rogers

Date: 2/1/2014 7:04:00 AM

Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice imagery...Where is this place SKAT, I'd love to take my "Valentine" there and picnic 'tll this glorious sunrise...smile, Robert