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Sun Blessed

To look intently into you almost renders me blind And yet, your daily illumination provides the clearest view I'll ever find I saw you differently recently Through a prism of glass your rays, tinted at the rim mirroring your energy mass Upon further inspection I tried to count each vertical wave the heat almost permeated the glass with each surge of warmth that you gave Approaching too closely will deem total annihilation Yet you are life, announcing another new day of hopeful elation I forget that you provide such strength How kind of you to remind me as you bathe my glistening skin morning star gleaming upon my body Quench my thirst as I drink of thee Nourish me with the heat of every ray Even as red and orange merge with yellow signaling the end of yet another day Hydrogen burning into helium That's how you shine like gold Gaseous orb aflame like a fire ball Such a brilliant spectacle to behold Paying homage to your elements such an essential component of my birth Sun, I embrace you Shedding light upon this earth.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/11/2016 6:55:00 PM
wow, what a gorgeous homage to Sun. I love the sun and I love this poem, Dineen. And I think I have seen all your poems now. I clicked on a lot of them just to find this one!!
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 6/12/2016 10:21:00 AM
Gee Andrea, I am sort of speechless, the time and effort that this took, what to say... You are so supportive, your comments are warm, thought provoking, and encourage growth. Not only are you a gifted writer, but you obviously have a love for the art. Thank you very much!
Date: 2/16/2016 10:31:00 PM
You truly have skills, that was a wonderful read. Enjoyed this poem. Cheers Craig
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 2/21/2016 9:16:00 AM
Quite a compliment coming from quite a talent as yourself. Thank you!
Date: 2/7/2016 9:26:00 AM
thanks for the reply
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 2/21/2016 9:15:00 AM
You're welcome!
Date: 1/31/2016 6:12:00 AM
Good day, Dineen, extravaganza sun galore ... to drink every sunray. You pinned the warmth and comfort of the world's largest star. Thanks for embracing an every day joy shedding light on all far ends. A perfect 7. Hope to see a new one by you. Sending hugs... LINDA
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 1/31/2016 7:35:00 AM
There really is beauty all around us, sometimes the negative can place shadows but it's luster remains. Your comments have a warmth like sunshine, thank you.
Date: 1/30/2016 1:56:00 AM
Dineen, I adore the sun and give thanks for all the light we share. Hugs. SKAT
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 1/30/2016 4:05:00 PM
Illuminating the world, thank you so much.
Date: 1/29/2016 10:17:00 PM
Beautifully written Dineen, a 7...
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 1/30/2016 4:04:00 PM
I am humbled, thank you Joseph.

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