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Sun Bathing

The steaming sun rays,
Beating against your green coat;
Prickly as a thorn.

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  1. Date: 5/27/2009 3:40:00 PM
    Uh, nice verse in the end! Thanks for the image =)

  1. Date: 5/19/2009 4:51:00 PM
    Love this, great work on your haiku.

  1. Date: 5/18/2009 11:17:00 PM
    I think this is a great haiku, nice 5/7/5 flow. Love E.

  1. Date: 5/18/2009 10:25:00 PM
    Prickly as a thorm, must be a cactus with its greet coat. Love the idea of it basking in the sun...Raul

  1. Date: 5/18/2009 3:44:00 PM
    creative ...I love it. Bg

  1. Date: 5/18/2009 3:36:00 PM
    I love reading the haiku form, I think this plant needs to find some shade, good write.

  1. Date: 5/18/2009 3:14:00 PM
    This reminds me of the little snake we had sunbathing on our patio recently. Smiles from Lolita