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Warm sunbeams blazing down flooding the lands encouraging the flora to burst forth in vibrant colour sweetly scenting stirring senses and passions giving hope

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/10/2016 12:34:00 PM
I'm currently doing a school project on Tetractys. I had to look at ten that I liked from the internet. In my list, this one is my all time favorite. I love this poem and how its simple but makes you think. Thank you for creating such a lovely poem. ~ Carrie
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Date: 5/23/2015 6:51:00 PM
Shadow, I am looking at this as an example of tetractys, very nicely written 7, I want to try writing a triple
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Date: 4/21/2015 11:56:00 AM
Am impressed....good work
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Date: 4/23/2015 4:34:00 PM
ty Afolabi hugs
Date: 2/3/2015 2:10:00 AM
Just golden Shadow!
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Date: 2/3/2015 5:39:00 PM
ty Connie hugs
Date: 1/28/2015 7:58:00 PM
golden beautiful pen linda
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Date: 2/3/2015 5:38:00 PM
ty mate nice to see you Liam hugs
Date: 1/26/2015 4:33:00 PM
This poem allows me to feel that sun's warmth beaming down. Love it!
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Date: 2/3/2015 5:38:00 PM
ty ML appreciated hugs
Date: 1/24/2015 8:03:00 AM
The hope of spring is encouraging right now..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 2/3/2015 5:37:00 PM
ty Sara hugs
Date: 1/24/2015 6:44:00 AM
There is a warmness in this piece inspiring hope...hugs Tim
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Date: 2/3/2015 5:37:00 PM
ty Tim hugs
Date: 1/24/2015 6:30:00 AM
I can feel the beautiful sunlight upon my face with this beautiful.hopeful and warming poem.
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Date: 2/3/2015 5:36:00 PM
ty Charmaine hugs

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