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I heard autumn's voice as it echoed that day Telling summer it must end Summer then sighed, and teary eyed, reluctantly went away Colors of red and gold autumn did send But the sun diminished in warmth Telling summer it must end Gone were the butterflies fluttering charms they seemed to have flown away with the wind As the sun diminished in warmth The hummingbirds too were harder to find They knew that summer was through they also floated away with the wind The trees mourned the loss of their leaves too And the flowers could no longer abide They knew that summer was through I listened awhile as I stood outside And I heard autumn's voice as it echoed that day And when the flowers could no longer abide Summer then sighed, and teary eyed, reluctantly went away 8-26-2013

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Date: 10/30/2013 12:07:00 PM
wonderful win.....LOVE SKAT
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Date: 10/29/2013 11:47:00 AM
Joseph, lovely win....PD
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Date: 8/27/2013 11:51:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work..It has great poetic quality...I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara
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Date: 8/26/2013 3:16:00 PM
i can see that you feel EXACTLY as I do with your poem's message of melancholy!! I LOVE how you did yours, Joseph.
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Joseph May
Date: 8/26/2013 5:21:00 PM
thank you Andrea...yes sadness seems to be the main emotion
Date: 8/26/2013 2:46:00 PM
Very nice description, Joseph! Terry (and thanks for your kind words!)
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Joseph May
Date: 8/26/2013 5:20:00 PM
thank you Terry...good to see you
Date: 8/26/2013 11:50:00 AM
Nice once Joseph xx
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Joseph May
Date: 8/26/2013 5:19:00 PM
thank you Mandy
Date: 8/26/2013 9:15:00 AM
- Sad to say goodbye to the summer beautiful days ..... lovely written, Joseph!
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Joseph May
Date: 8/26/2013 5:17:00 PM
Thank you Anne....always sad to see summer go
Date: 8/26/2013 7:35:00 AM
Kind of sad...but I enjoyed it..BG
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Joseph May
Date: 8/26/2013 5:15:00 PM
Thank you Barbara..

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