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haiku-weeping willow trees are very beautiful to me. They grow in toward water. weeping willow sways hazy through a summer screen wild waltz in hot wind 8/4/20 Traditional Haiku - Nature Themed' Contest Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Date: 9/6/2020 7:18:00 AM
I always enjoy writing Horn Haiku. Yours is wonderful painting a great picture.
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Date: 8/10/2020 7:27:00 AM
Gorgeous haiku! I am particularly fond of the willow too. Congratulations for your win! xomo
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Date: 8/8/2020 1:02:00 PM
I love weeping willow trees, many congratulations on your win janis:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/8/2020 12:34:00 PM
Beautiful Janis. congrats on a top win.
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Date: 8/8/2020 9:49:00 AM
That last line was exceptional! Congrats on your win. Love willows!!
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Date: 8/8/2020 6:29:00 AM
I could picture that hot summer wind and the swaying weeping willow Janis. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 8/7/2020 6:53:00 PM
Beautiful! Congratulations on your win
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Date: 8/7/2020 12:33:00 PM
I do love the way willow trees move in the wind. You captured that beautifully in your "wild waltz!" Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/7/2020 9:08:00 AM
Beautifully done, Janis! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/7/2020 6:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Love the images of weeping willow.
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Date: 8/7/2020 4:15:00 AM
Janis, congratulations on your winning placement with your gorgeous haiku!
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Date: 4/18/2018 11:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 4/17/2018 1:47:00 PM
One of my favourite trees. So calming to be beneath, especially when they sway. Congratulations Sian.
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Date: 4/17/2018 11:45:00 AM
Gorgeous! Congratulations on your win :) xomo!
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Date: 4/17/2018 11:32:00 AM
Thanks for your continued support Sian, congratulations on your bronze medal placing... Mick
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Date: 4/17/2018 10:41:00 AM
So beautiful! Congrats!
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Date: 4/17/2018 8:03:00 AM
- Congratulations on your 3rd place in the contest, Janis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/17/2018 7:53:00 AM
Congrats on your bronze medal win, Sian.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 4/17/2018 11:29:00 AM
I guess you have had another look at my remit, going to stick with the medals. Thinking of featuring my choices on the remit page too, (just the first three as in 1st, 2nd, 3rd, what do you reckon?
Date: 6/13/2017 7:46:00 PM
Congrats once again Janis, for placing with this classic haiku!! ;-)
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Date: 6/8/2017 2:49:00 PM
this is gorgeous! Congrats on the list.
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Date: 11/19/2016 3:05:00 AM
I enjoyed the simplistic imagery your haiku, Janis. Congrats for having it featured in the Poetrysoup homepage!! ;-)
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Date: 6/9/2016 1:07:00 PM
Lovely write Janis.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 6/9/2016 6:59:00 PM
Thanks, James
Date: 5/28/2016 5:46:00 PM
truly beautiful...big congrats Janis!
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Janis Thompson
Date: 5/28/2016 10:35:00 PM
And a big thanks to you, David
Date: 5/28/2016 4:19:00 PM
Love a well written haiku - congrats on your win! - Jesse
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Janis Thompson
Date: 5/28/2016 10:34:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jesse
Date: 5/28/2016 3:28:00 PM
I can picture the willow dancing in the wind...lovely
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Janis Thompson
Date: 5/28/2016 10:33:00 PM
Thanks, Tim glad you got that image...
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