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Summer Sanity

searing summer sun seeking seaside sanity sea breezes save Soul +++++++ August 2, 2014 Form: Haiku Dr. Ram Mehta Sixth Place Win Contest: Haiku "aha" moments by Regina Riddle

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Skat A
Date: 5/23/2015 11:09:00 AM
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LOVE THIS
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 8/14/2014 8:26:00 AM
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Wonderful Haiku Dr.Ram. Nice to see you here at the Soup once again. I have not been here for awhile. I have not been to any other site. I have just lost the ump to write. congrats on your win. Love, Carol
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Sally Stevens
Date: 8/12/2014 9:54:00 AM
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Hi Dr. Mehta, Great usage of alliteration in this piece and your words express a deep truth. I want to thank you for reading my posting, but I'm going around in circles. I just joined this site and it's not easy to navigate. Can you please help?
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Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 8/11/2014 5:15:00 PM
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Cool really cool!
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Linda Jackson
Date: 8/9/2014 5:15:00 AM
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l like the alliteration. Brilliant. Best wishes
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Sam Raj
Date: 8/9/2014 4:55:00 AM
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Namaste Dr. Ramji, This is an Alliterated Haiku which deserves a top notch placement. I have been reading all the winning Haikus! I find the interpretation of structure has been democratised. Thanks for sharing
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/8/2014 8:20:00 PM
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a cool alliterative one. BIG congrats on your win.
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James Fraser
Date: 8/8/2014 3:56:00 PM
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The delightful breeze, saving grieve. Fine poetic message Dr. Ram, and a lovely congrats Sir, James....
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 8/8/2014 2:34:00 PM
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impressive ku and alliterism, dr ram.. huge congrats!.. huggs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/8/2014 11:50:00 AM
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- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/8/2014 11:04:00 AM
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wonderful alliteration a worthy winner:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Abdul Malik
Date: 8/8/2014 8:41:00 AM
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I like this!
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Craig Glenister
Date: 8/8/2014 12:46:00 AM
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Took me home.Thank you
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Gwendolen Song
Date: 8/7/2014 1:47:00 PM
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Hi doc! Oh the power of an ocean breeze. It does seem to cleanse the soul...Wonderful to read your work again.
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Paul Callus
Date: 8/6/2014 8:24:00 AM
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Excellent haiku where alliteration takes centre stage. gl in Regins's contest. // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 8/8/2014 2:56:00 PM
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....back to give you congratulations.
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/3/2014 6:54:00 PM
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love the alliteration Dr Ram....cheers Tim
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/3/2014 9:16:00 AM
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Very lovely haiku Dr Ram!
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