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Summer Rain

Scorching heat fires my body; Under the sun I have nobody, Missing a soul that I adore; Make him come to my open door. Everyone loves the summer sun Resonates of kids having fun; Riveting, exhilarating. Alas, I am sorely missing In this undulating terrain; Not a drop of summer rain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/11/2014 9:46:00 PM
Congrats on a wonderful win
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 8/12/2014 7:26:00 AM
Thanks, Joseph! :)
Date: 8/11/2014 8:04:00 PM
Congrats on a great win!!!
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Date: 8/11/2014 4:40:00 PM
Love the longing and the heat...congrats
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Date: 8/11/2014 2:38:00 PM
Great lament for lack of rain. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/11/2014 2:12:00 PM
beautifully done, congrats on your second place win in my contest
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Date: 8/12/2014 7:37:00 AM
Grateful here for your appreciation of my piece, Francine! God bless you! :)
Date: 8/11/2014 4:30:00 AM
wonderfudescription on summer and rain congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 8/11/2014 7:11:00 AM
Thanks, Jan! God bless you! hugs back :))
Date: 8/11/2014 4:12:00 AM
Wow Luna great imagery n a wonderful poem, congrats on ur big win!
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 8/11/2014 7:12:00 AM
Thanks, Dr, Upma! God bless you! :)
Date: 8/11/2014 2:04:00 AM
Brilliant write on sunset rain, Luna. congrats on the win
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 8/11/2014 2:12:00 AM
Thank you, Dr. Ram, for your kind words! God bless!

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