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Summer Pain

As she walks in the pouring summer rain, That plays an endless song of pain. Though he left her so very long ago She feels him near everywhere she goes. The days hurry past her, But she'll always remember The last time she saw him in the sun. It was the day last summer had begun. The rain in which they once kissed, All she could do now was miss, The long dances with him in the rain, The kisses that chased away all her pain. The sky blackens above and the wind, Grows strong as the sky is dimmed. The weather reflects the storm in her heart. Everyday with him gone tears her apart. To feel his arms just one more time, A mountain in a heartbeat she'd climb. As she sees the beast made of wind and cloud, She says his name once more, aloud.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/11/2014 8:33:00 PM
enjoying this again... . Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/15/2014 6:37:00 AM
Inspiring thoughts to give up something to relive and congrats on the fine win, Emily
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Date: 10/8/2013 8:59:00 PM
Emily, congrats ........ enjoyed :) LOVE ~SKAT~
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Date: 10/6/2013 8:08:00 PM
you brought this picture to life with your words. I enjoyed reading it
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Date: 10/6/2013 5:55:00 PM
Emily CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for supporting the ""LONGING poem"" contest <----- Awesome!! If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem "FORBIDDEN". Enjoy my latest blog! "ALL SHE WROTE" if you like:) AT -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15995&PoetID=18720 -------take care & enjoy your coming week. Love*** Linda
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Date: 8/9/2013 7:49:00 PM
A fine crafted poem Emily.I liked this one from you.Excellent!
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Date: 7/25/2013 9:57:00 PM
hello, EMILY the poem is hot and Awesome... congrats with your summer time poem...love Linda
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Date: 7/25/2013 3:29:00 AM
Absolutely LOVE the last line Emily...Great summer poem of lost love...Congratulations - Tim
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Date: 7/25/2013 12:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Emily xx
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Date: 7/24/2013 1:33:00 PM
Emily, a lovely gift of a poem. Thank you for the support my contest. Stop by and enjoy my blog: (A Lavender Day-- summer contest) winners. Have yourself an awesome day. LUV ~SKAT
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Date: 7/9/2013 8:28:00 PM
I love the title of this one and how you used images of summer storms with the feeling of pain. Very nicely done, dear.
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Date: 7/9/2013 7:03:00 PM
Tremendous emotion! Very gripping & intense! Well done!
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