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Summer Moon

Slowly pulsing through glittered haze Under cloudscape, her locks blow wild Misty the blushed roses, ablaze Moon of summer, warmth of hayrides Enchanting peach fragrance of the night Reveal your glory, dear chromed fay, My eyes chase a Selene’s delight Over hills wrapped in flamed crochet. Oh, sleep denies a lullaby No matter how you beam, goodbye! Francine Roberts' Summer Acrostic Contest by nette onclaud

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Robert Lindley

Date: 8/11/2014 8:08:00 PM

Congrats on a fine write and great win!!!!

Tim Smith

Date: 8/11/2014 7:17:00 PM

Stopping back with congrats on this magical piece...hugs Tim

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/11/2014 2:42:00 PM

A great write Nette. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/11/2014 2:16:00 PM

congrats nette, your work always gives me just what I'm looking for in my contests

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/11/2014 4:50:00 AM

thats lovely nette! ur summer moon shines out thru haze, congrats on big win!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/11/2014 4:37:00 AM

simply sublime acrostic Nette one day I hope to be able to write like this you inspire me:-) Many congrats. Hugs jan xxxx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/11/2014 2:08:00 AM

Lovely flow of the words on summer moon, nette. congrats

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 6/26/2014 6:49:00 PM

flamed crochet,,,DIggIt! This reminds me of the moon of Friday the 13th this month!

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/21/2014 6:06:00 PM

Nice stylish acrostic wonderfully penned. Read like a winner. Good luck. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl

Kelly Deschler

Date: 6/19/2014 3:25:00 PM

A very nice acrostic, Nette! Your words flow so effortlessly here, which is sometimes hard to do with this form. I really enjoyed reading this beautiful and enchanting poem! Good luck in the contest!

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 6/18/2014 8:05:00 AM

I can see your beautiful moon lit night. Thanks you for this peaceful end to a hectic evening.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/18/2014 4:36:00 AM

- Really beautiful, Nette ! - Good luck in the contest - Have a great Wednesday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 6/17/2014 5:49:00 PM

Excellent; is all I can say. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 6/17/2014 5:46:00 PM

very beautifully painted piece loved the image painted here

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/17/2014 5:04:00 PM

Ahh!! Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest.."Over hills wrapped in flamed crochet". I really like that line..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Tim Smith

Date: 6/17/2014 4:24:00 PM

How beautifully you describe the scene nette...hugs Tim

Aiyah Torres

Date: 6/17/2014 3:07:00 PM

awesomely crafted masterpiece... I love the fragrance of summer eve... so gentle and soothing..Thank you for the visit on my page, nette.. I'm fine.. thanks for remembering me!.. :O)) I hoep all is well for you..^_^

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/17/2014 2:41:00 PM

ahhh, you were on my same wave length going with summer moon!! Very lovely, Nette.

Poet Tacito

Date: 6/17/2014 1:57:00 PM

Sigh...yay for peaches & cloudscapes. Breathtaking.

Justin Bordner

Date: 6/17/2014 12:59:00 PM

Lovely spirit and flow Nette. " Over hills wrapped in flamed crochet..." that's pure beauty. Enjoy the chase! J.A.B.

Rora Onna

Date: 6/17/2014 12:59:00 PM

I found myself swept away by the mystique of this poem! Sometimes, the moon can't make me sleep either, especially when she's up there like a majestic queen waiting for me to celebrate her fullness. A fave, a fave, Nette!

Manny Paras

Date: 6/17/2014 12:51:00 PM

This is out -of- this- world breathtaking and I am in this glorious night in your finely penned poem. I moon-gaze with you, master!