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Summer Love

Love to heart is what summer signifies to the farmer’s year It brings to harvest all the lovely flowers of very soul Now the heart is so content that a few drops can overfill it +++++++ June 10, 2014 Form : Sijo (3-4-4-4. 3-4-4-4, 3-5-4-3) (Syllables 45) Dr. Ram Mehta Contest:Sijo Strings by Debbie Guzzi

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/7/2014 7:35:00 PM

Lovely piece, congratulations!

Len Gasun

Date: 7/4/2014 1:15:00 PM

This is extremely beautiful. So enjoyed. Thank u so much for sharing my dear friend Dr. Ram. Many congratulations on your great win! love lots, Leonora

Elaine George

Date: 7/4/2014 6:14:00 AM

Magniicant! Dr. Ram. What a beautiful Sijo. Many congrats on your win. bfn Lainie

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/3/2014 10:30:00 PM

Oh wow, the last line is so beautiful !! Well done, Dr. Ram !!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2014 9:51:00 PM

VERY nicely done. Very nicely won!!! Congrats.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/3/2014 11:35:00 AM

Nice win...PD

Mohan Chutani

Date: 7/2/2014 11:59:00 PM

Dr. Ram, very elegant Sijo on summer love- it brings to harvest all the lovely flowers of very soul- and brimmed it is contended- gives a very satisfying feel. Congrats on top win. Mohan

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/2/2014 5:34:00 PM

Grats on your win :) :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/2/2014 5:11:00 PM

The third line is a wow !!! Kudos Dir..:)

Theresa Stephens

Date: 7/2/2014 5:08:00 PM

Hi, Congrats on your fine win.' Heart brimming over with love' makes happy thoughts to dwell on. All the best, Theresa xx

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/2/2014 3:37:00 PM

Hi Dr. Ram, congratulations yet another welll-deserved great win! This is such a beautiful. Kindest regards.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/2/2014 3:02:00 PM

Hi Ram, what a charming entry, great that you brought in nature & man [maybe 2nd line should be /every soul?] that line 3 is just perfect. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 7/3/2014 5:47:00 AM

Thanks, deb, for the appreciation. Light and love

John Lawless

Date: 7/2/2014 2:31:00 PM

Love that last line...sums up the joys of summer and of summer love.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/2/2014 2:12:00 PM

Wonderful write Dr Ram ! Some great similes here wid love ,, congrats on huge win!

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/2/2014 1:34:00 PM

Congrats on a great win, Dr. Mehta my friend! I love this take on summer love.. Hugs. Arlene

Paul Callus

Date: 7/2/2014 1:13:00 PM

Ripe time to reap what we sow in love. Congrats Dr on a deserved win. // paul

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 6/13/2014 9:55:00 PM

Beautiful Sijo Ram... Enjoying my visit. Verlena

Arlene Smith

Date: 6/12/2014 6:09:00 AM

Dr. Mehta, This is an amazing write!.. All in compassing nature and humanity. I adore this one. Good luck in the contest my friend.. Arlene..

V P Mahur

Date: 6/11/2014 4:41:00 AM

Dear Sir, Love is so powerful that even a few drops give a great pleasure and deep content. Thanks for your comments on my poem. VP

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/10/2014 8:01:00 PM

Oh, wow.......so beautiful. It seems as if this is a classic example of poetry. Lovely piece!

Mark Peterson

Date: 6/10/2014 2:29:00 PM

Lovely write, Dr. Ram—a poem whose effect lingers well past the duration of its reading. Thanks for commenting on my poem "A Day in Life," written for catharsis and hen deleted.

Kevin Rocheleau

Date: 6/10/2014 1:16:00 PM

Nice work, short and sweet.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/10/2014 7:43:00 AM

That last line is quite stunning, and a great way to compare the two things.

Joseph May

Date: 6/10/2014 6:48:00 AM

Very good sijo Dr Ram...