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Summer Love

The sunrise glows on your face as you squint and yawn and stretch.
Your sunburn looks bright red against the white T shirt you borrowed.
Such a tired pretty lady starting my day with a smile.

We walk along the beach, you laugh, as the surf tickles your feet.
The breeze lifts some gulls and they glide like children's tethered kites.
It is days like these I will always wish to visit again.

When evening comes and the waves break white in the night,
then, to their melody, I will  fall asleep  with you  in my  heart,
dreaming that somehow you will always be there in the morn.

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  1. Date: 7/4/2014 7:01:00 AM
    Top notch in my book, Craig Beautiful sijo story of love. bfn Lainie

  1. Date: 7/3/2014 10:32:00 PM
    This is such a breath of fresh air........filled with ocean breezes, with tenderness and gentle love.....just lovely (that last line is so wonderful !!)

  1. Date: 7/3/2014 10:23:00 PM
    OH MY GOSH, this is one of the very best I am seeing on the list. I LOVE this one, Craig. For me, it's up in the top half!!! Congrats anyway, my friend.

  1. Date: 7/3/2014 11:28:00 AM
    Hello Craig, long time no see... this is a sweet tender loving poem.. congrats...Linda

  1. Date: 7/3/2014 6:09:00 AM
    Lovely imagery of the summer love memories, Craig, congrats on the win

  1. Date: 7/3/2014 3:00:00 AM
    This is a heartbreaking poem... with an optimistic message of intense love although sad too.. Congrats on the write and win!!!!!!!!!! Dutch Greetings

  1. Date: 7/2/2014 6:29:00 PM
    Oh this is a great one! I love the images I could see it so perfectly, That would be a summer love not forgotten, Grats on your win with this :)

  1. Date: 7/2/2014 3:54:00 PM
    Hi Craig, congratulations on a well-deserved great win! The imagery is magnificent! Beautiful write! Kindest regards.

  1. Date: 7/2/2014 3:36:00 PM
    Hey Craig, I could not resist the heart & the colorfulness of the scenes yet each of these can be read as a paragraph - work on each grouping being a stand a lone as well as work together - leaps mid line & bigger leap to line 3. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/2/2014 2:02:00 PM
    Ahh Craig, this one is my favorite so far! A very soft romantic read.. Congrats on a great win my friend. Hugs.. Arlene

  1. Date: 6/17/2014 7:55:00 AM
    Reads like a winner..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit..Sara

  1. Date: 6/10/2014 4:17:00 PM
    Craig, think short long short as in the haiku the content is great [remember to TRY to do the word groupings in the lines [The sunrise]3 [glows on your face]4 [as you squint]4 [and yawn and stretch] GOOD leave 1 space for me?- okies line 2 should be optically as well as syllable wise longer than1 & 3 - you always like to polish things up, this is already a high contender! Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/7/2014 3:20:00 PM
    ohh, A- OK, craig.. SOUP MAIL

  1. Date: 6/5/2014 8:16:00 PM
    You have such a romantic soul.......what lovely string you compose........and what lovely heart-strings within your prose ! :)