Summer Job

morning by the hill ants with foodstuff walk in line - the sun shines all day 7th Place - Traditional Haiku II Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton *This is a repost, the original of which I have inadvertently deleted while trying to delete a double posting, hence it no longer appears in the winner's list. Posting again today in view of Viv Wigley's blog, Old Friends. **I tried to see if the deleted file can still be retrieved by PoetrySoup but after sometime, they replied that they can't. This is the link to the old post where only the comments remain: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/summer_job_685960 image credit: thumbs.dreamstime.com

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/13/2015 2:56:00 PM

Industrious ants stay busy all the time..Great descriptive work about them..I enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Justin Bordner

Date: 7/13/2015 2:58:00 AM

So many ways to worship through industry...I like the labor and light of this write Kim...J.A.B.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/12/2015 5:16:00 PM

Yes, I think I saw it before. I love the picture with it. and if I did not say it before. CONGRATS on the win.

Paul Callus

Date: 7/12/2015 4:40:00 PM

Hi Kim! This is the same comment which I posted on your earlier poem which got deleted: "Great job done, Kim! Love the visual and the imagery. When the sun shines ants make hay! #7 hugs // paul" :)

David Meade

Date: 7/12/2015 2:01:00 PM

Like the ants who respond to the deep call of nature to work - to gather, mirrors another deep call that resounds within our hearts -- a love that outshines the sun. Individually and collectively as a community, we share this generous gift life. Your words are rich food to dine upon! 7

Bharat Jawla

Date: 7/12/2015 6:20:00 AM

good poetry

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/12/2015 6:10:00 AM

- Hope they get paid well :))) - Great haiku, dear Kim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

... Gigno

Date: 7/12/2015 12:38:00 AM

!!!