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Summer Heat

poolside with a book my skin shedding shade bring on the burn 5/17/2016 Summer Contest

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Sandra Haight

Date: 5/21/2016 3:31:00 PM

Excellent Senryu, Lukas. Congratulations on your nice placement. Sandra

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/21/2016 12:12:00 PM

- Congratulations on your Summer poems, Lukas - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 5/21/2016 7:53:00 AM

An enjoyable senryu, Lukas. Like you I used to 'shed' my skin; now I take it slower, having become more aware of the sun's damage to health. // Congratulations! ~ Regards // paul

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/20/2016 10:30:00 PM

Cooking the books ;-) nice write Lukas.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2016 7:35:00 PM

I really enjoyed this one but put it lower only because you used caps on the front of the lines. You did a great job. Congrats in my contest.

Messoh Vincent

Date: 5/17/2016 3:48:00 PM

I can begin to see your sweaty back shining in the summer sun with your feet doused in cold water.....Thanks for sharing this.