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Summer Grass

Summer Grass

Willowy green blades;
SUMMER'S textured green carpet...
Waving lazily.

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  1. Date: 6/18/2010 5:45:00 AM
    Oh - that's nice ! the willowy waving is just right for long grass Well done

  1. Date: 5/22/2010 5:39:00 PM
    nice! perhaps ..jade carpet? instead of green twice? And I'm with andrea great last line!

  1. Date: 5/21/2010 9:10:00 AM
    Love that last line, it is so summery! congratulations. Andrea

  1. Date: 5/18/2010 8:14:00 PM
    Liked this one the first time I read it. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Charles's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep that pen flowing. Karen

  1. Date: 5/18/2010 12:42:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in Charles's "Strict Haiku" contest Jeralynn. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/18/2010 9:41:00 AM
    Jeralynn, congratulations on this textured, excellent Haiku! Chris.

  1. Date: 5/18/2010 9:08:00 AM
    Congrats on your win in the contest! Very nice...Jimmy

  1. Date: 5/18/2010 8:19:00 AM
    Feeling this one, the lazy days of summer. Enjoyed.

  1. Date: 5/18/2010 7:58:00 AM
    Congrats Jeralynn on your winning poem in the Strictly Haiku contest with this awesome poem... enjoy another great win..luv.. Linda-Marie

  1. Date: 5/17/2010 11:59:00 PM
    Congratulations on your awesome 10th place win in my contest!!!!--------Charles

  1. Date: 5/15/2010 3:36:00 PM
    Very nice Haiku, Jeralyn...good luck in the contest.....Later, Jimmy

  1. Date: 5/15/2010 9:34:00 AM
    Very nice~enjoy the last line~~Rick

  1. Date: 5/14/2010 11:08:00 PM
    Awesome! Splendid Haiku, Jeralynn! Good luck in Charles' Contest. A winner in my list! Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/14/2010 4:02:00 PM
    Nice use of imagery and alliteration for a creative perspective. If this is for the contest, best wishes. Keep that pen flowing. Karen

  1. Date: 5/14/2010 3:12:00 PM
    This is a beautifully written haiku, Jeralynn. I love the thought of the green grass "waving lazily" in the summer breeze. Best wishes for the contest! Love, Carolyn