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Summer Fun Summer was not much fun in the teenage years In fact there was very little of it but lots of anxious tears Then the summer disco started in the village hall We couldn’t believe our luck we were gonna have a ball. But who would come to a village disco not on a bus route There were only about fifteen teenagers, and they were all related to boot. Oh what joy, the army camp, sent in the boy cadets We were all allowed to mix with them and this we did you can bet. But there I was wallflower self- conscious feeling dull Not asked to dance by any boy no one to give a thrill Until the tallest most handsome boy, his smile lit up the room Came and sat with me you should have watched me bloom. He was the catch they all wanted, but none could catch his eye Just me sat in the corner, and he never passed me by At the end of each dance night, we walked home hand in hand His kisses they were magical, I was in some promised land. We only met once a week through the summer of seventy-two What a summer it was full of fun and happiness and never blue I often wonder about that boy who kissed so well at age thirteen What a catch for some woman, and of his kisses I now just dream © 09/09/2012

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Date: 9/19/2012 12:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Craig's "Summer Fun" contest GG. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/16/2012 8:02:00 AM
Wow...this is one heck of a summer, gal! You sure told on yourself! hee hee hee! Congrats on putting your life in rhyme...this was a fun read! gwendolen
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Date: 9/15/2012 11:17:00 PM
Hi Mandy, a wonderful congratulations with your awesome win in craig cornish's " Summer Fun " Xool contest. ~ :-) take care* PD
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Date: 9/15/2012 5:15:00 AM
Beautifully penned on summer,Mandy.Congratulations on win!
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Date: 9/13/2012 11:18:00 AM
you make summer seem so eternally romantic... such fine write, mandy.. love it!...congrats on your fine win.. :) huggs
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Date: 9/13/2012 9:33:00 AM
Mandy, congratulations on your win for this lovely verse...summer kisses, ah what could be better... Cynthia
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Date: 9/13/2012 9:25:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS FRIEND MANDY ON WINNING YOUR LOVELY POEM...CHEERS!!!!
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Date: 9/13/2012 8:05:00 AM
Ops!! I have enjoyed reading your poem, Mandy! It really deserved to win! Indeed a fun summer time especially from the 3rd stanza up to the last scene! MY HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN! thanks for sharing!!! hugs and luv, leonora
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Date: 9/13/2012 2:28:00 AM
Enchanting memories Mandy. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 9/12/2012 8:42:00 PM
I think your idea of summer fun was the BEST. I would give anything to go back to that fun kissing at about same time period as you were in with this winning poem. congrats, mandy.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 9/13/2012 6:31:00 AM
Bet we could have had some fun..xx
Date: 9/12/2012 7:38:00 PM
Exciting memories for that young girl. Congratulations Mandy. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/12/2012 7:25:00 PM
Sweet memories of puppy love, Mandy! Congrats on your wonderful win...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 9/12/2012 6:16:00 PM
congrats on your win Mandy....nicely done
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Date: 9/9/2012 6:58:00 PM
I had a summer love like this. Such wonderful memories they give us. You described it very well, mandy!!! (you and I very close in age I can see.)
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Date: 9/9/2012 6:30:00 PM
LOl so sweet [second to last line ..about..typo hon] should do well a fine story! Light & Love
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 9/9/2012 11:47:00 PM
Thanks sweetie will do it now xx
Date: 9/9/2012 5:19:00 PM
Sigh...young love..nothing like it...this is so sweet. BG
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Date: 9/9/2012 5:12:00 PM
an awesome poem Mandy with a beautiful setting of young love and fun .. we all had some endings of similar scenes but oh those memories luv .. best wishes ..
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Date: 9/9/2012 10:50:00 AM
very nice poem Mandy......best wishes in the contest.....love...Joseph
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Date: 9/9/2012 9:07:00 AM
awww, lovely nostalgic write, my friend - I'd love to know what happened to my first love too
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 9/9/2012 9:16:00 AM
well if you let spiders stay in she is well gone my friend xx
Date: 9/9/2012 8:12:00 AM
Ah yes... that summer of yours... those summers of yore... Wonderful poem... Terry
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Date: 9/9/2012 7:35:00 AM
I'm envious of your Summer Fun, (wish i was there) but looking on the bright side, look what wonderful poetry it created. yes, what i'm trying to says is: love your poem
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