Summer Days

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~Summer Days~ (Triolet) Summer season brings us very hot weather But the days cools again when it depart Hear birds, see butterflies, flowers, heather Summer season brings us very hot weather There is fun and lots of sun altogether We see sunshine very bright for most part Summer season brings us very hot weather But the days cools again when it depart. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2013 February.13.2016 ~Author's Notes: This "Triolet" has been written this time using ten syllables lines,( The English style) instead, of the usual eight syllables ( The French style) which I usually write with more in the past.

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Jan Allison

Date: 2/13/2016 11:49:00 AM

I long for the warmth of summer days - beautiful imagery and images:-) hugs Jan xx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/15/2016 9:55:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly,Jan,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply I appreciate it most kind of you dear friend.Glad you liked the images too.Wishing you a very lovely week in his light God bless you always!:) Hugs!D