Summer Days

Summer Days Summer days brings us very hot weather But the days cool down 'gain when it depart. Hear birds, see the butterflies, and heather. Summer season brings us very hot weather. There is fun and lots of sun altogether. Enjoy sunshine very bright for most part. Summer days brings us very hot weather But the days cool down 'gain when it depart. Written: September.25.2014 Sponsor: Alfred Vassallo Contest: one new Triolet

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Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/26/2014 8:49:00 AM

Nicely done Dorian. You just brought back a piece of summer when here by us summer is over.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/26/2014 10:07:00 AM

You're so lucky where you live and be done completely with it this year Brenda!...not so much so here in South Florida. lol.. Thank you for dropping in and all my friend. xxx D.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/26/2014 7:05:00 AM

beautiful warm piece

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/26/2014 10:02:00 AM

Thank you Liam! Xxxx D.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/25/2014 4:08:00 PM

lovely triolet with great imagery Dorian I've written my first one for the contest - good luck to you my friend:-) hugs jan xx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/25/2014 4:42:00 PM

Thank you so much Jan! And the same to you too my sweet friend! Glad you're participating in this triolet contest. The triolet form is so neat and just love everything about it. Kind of short, we poets have to make the best and most out the chosen words we select to use. And that's okay with me even if that is kind of very tight and restrictive at times with this form. See ya around my friend! Love and light! Hugs! xxxx D.