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Summer Day Walk

Teardrops, petals, ruffles and lace,
on my summer day walk, I slow my pace.
Beautiful, yellow gossamer balls of Dandelion,
white blooms drooping on a growth of Campion.
Underneath a tree grows vivid Periwinkle and Nettle,
and beside a flowing stream is yellow and white Daffodil.
In an open meadow, I bend low to pick some wild Strawberry,
as the gentle breeze bends the Daisy, Poppy and the pink Tansy.
My hand sweeps the delicate Clover and the intricate beautiful Yarrow,
at last, turning homeward with a bouquet of blue Cornflower and Mallow.

June 8, 2013


For the contest, Write Me A Summer Day

Copyright © Broken Wings

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  1. Date: 8/16/2013 2:10:00 PM
    Beside a flowing stream... does it for me. Oh, streams of the slopes of Mt Kenya!

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 3:17:00 PM
    This is a tremendous write my friend! I believe that this poem will rate very high within the contest Constance! You sure have inspired me to work on some nature poems! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 6/8/2013 11:55:00 PM
    This is first class ....Seren

  1. Date: 6/8/2013 11:40:00 PM
    Wonderful poem full of the beauty of nature..its a winner. BG

  1. Date: 6/8/2013 11:39:00 PM
    wow, she better like THIS gem!! It's far better than mine is, Constance. Guess I will post my own meager offering tomorrow. Also, I love how the format made it look like a small hill going down!

  1. Date: 6/8/2013 7:10:00 PM
    Good morning my dear friend Constance! I love your poem and I love walking around with you on this great summer day through this great poem of yours. I love it and the wonderful image. Thank you so much for sharing and your precious time stopping by. Have a blessed weekend! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 6/8/2013 5:01:00 PM
    much enjoyed fine pen Shadow