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Summer Couplet

Upon my knees in desperation     the parched sand trickles through my hand
the steady drumbeat of Summer's song      rolls like death across the land

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  1. Date: 7/7/2013 10:55:00 AM
    loving your summer couplet :-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Andrea, contest!!! Take Care *xox* Linda

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 4:35:00 PM
    Paints a stark but realistic picture. Congrats on your win, Rick! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 4:35:00 AM
    as usual a very excellent entry and win. Congrats. Rick

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 6:14:00 PM
    Really creative entry... deserves the win. Congratulations.... Jake

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 3:08:00 PM
    RICK. Congratulations in Andrea's steaming hot summer couplet contest... what else could we ask for -the constant reminder of the hottest season that wonders through my Texas Sky. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 1:20:00 PM
    Beautiful couplet here Rick!Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 1:11:00 PM
    This is a beauty, Rick !! Living in California, we know that summer song so well..........calling for rain!! Congratulations on this beauty!

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 8:45:00 AM
    Rick, this was excellent. I actually envisioned it was written by an African where drought is so common. You really captured the essence of a drought stricken land for me. Congrats on your win. Soupmail.

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 8:38:00 AM
    You must live in hot country. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 8:19:00 AM
    Just great..lots to think about in this short piece. congrats on a stunning win. BG

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 7:31:00 AM
    Perfectly done with the meter setting the beat Rick!

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 9:04:00 AM
    The deep emotion of this simple form, resonates with every word. It is a stunning couplet, Rick.