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Five Fabulous Fun Footles

Bright sun What fun! White skin Too thin Like cake I bake Summer Bummer From sun I run *October 22, 2016. For Jan's Footle challenge.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/30/2016 1:22:00 PM

- Back to your winning poem, Carolyn :) - CONGRATULATIONS !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/30/2016 1:01:00 PM

CArolyn, yours was one of the best on the list. SO far there are five like that which I felt were really awesome. Congrats on your win!!

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/31/2016 10:36:00 AM

Inspire by the sunburned tourists here. LOL

Jan Allison

Date: 10/30/2016 1:00:00 PM

Many congrats on your top spot Carolyn:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/27/2016 1:50:00 AM

Ha ha...makes me laugh loud:) hope this one scores high:)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/24/2016 8:08:00 AM

Reads like winning material..Way to go for the contest..As we get older the sun isn't so good for us..Thanks for dropping by..I know that you are glad to be back home and fully operational..I don't think that I could do the candlelight writing because of my eyes but then maybe I should try it to see if I could..Oh, I did not place in Brian's contest..He wants things he can read outloud so I am sure he would have stumbled over all the words..LOL..Sara

Tim Smith

Date: 10/23/2016 3:16:00 PM

Some good footles...try to stay in the shade

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/24/2016 1:14:00 PM

People who live n Florida have a year-round tan. Sun-burned tourists are easy to spot in the crowd.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 10/23/2016 12:47:00 PM

I don't know how to go with the form, but sincerely, you penned this great.........A.M.

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/23/2016 7:04:00 AM

Hi Carolyn, These are nice footles. I enjoy the summer season.Don't forget the sunblock.I wish you the best of luck with contest;-)Alexis

Paul Callus

Date: 10/23/2016 6:20:00 AM

You did really well with these footles, Carolyn; you easily managed to stick to a topic, something which is still eluding me...I have to think harder!! Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/23/2016 5:52:00 AM

- Well done, Carolyn :)) - Good luck in the contest - Best wishes for a lovely Sunday and a great new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/22/2016 8:56:00 PM

very cute, Carolyn. YOu are footling right and proper there!!!