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Summer Breeze

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Below is the poem entitled Summer Breeze which was written by poet Mung Danlahpai. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Summer Breeze

Summer Breeze

Summer breeze murmurs
suddently rushes to flowers
Scorching sun
In harvested farm
Cuck-coo-coo-coo
I hear a dove calling
It makes me recall my feeling
Ooh! on this sunny day
"I'm lonely ", I say
Not knowing where to go
Still thinking what to do
Among the kisses of summer breeze
Keep wiping out sweat from my face

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  1. Date: 7/10/2013 9:04:00 AM
    Lovely piece.Welcome on board Mung.

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 10:15:00 AM
    Welcome to Poetrysoup! Your poem reminds me of a cowboy song I know. Good beginning to your poetic career at the "soup" Peace & Love Matthew Anish

    Danlahpai Avatar Mung Danlahpai
    Date: 7/1/2013 4:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Really? It's a great coincidence with your song. I didn't purpose to copy from any cowboy songs. It's really my feeling that occurred when I was at farm. Thank you fully for your support and comment.
  1. Date: 6/29/2013 12:17:00 AM
    This is a good start, I feel the underlying emotion.

    Danlahpai Avatar Mung Danlahpai
    Date: 7/1/2013 3:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, thanks for your comment on my work. I was born in a village. It is really rural far about 50 miles form Urban. My parents are farmers. Our farm is my small world.
  1. Date: 6/27/2013 11:44:00 PM
    I'm new to poetrysoup and also new to poetry. Here I've written two poems. I do not have so much experiences for writing poems. I'll so grateful to everyone of you if you drop comments on my work.