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~Summer~ (Dorian 42) Summer is fun, seasons hot Umm, temperature just soar! Moving 'round, is kind of hard Makes one tired and rains some more End of summer brings next fall Rays from sun most folks adore. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 May.20.2015 "Dorian 42" is a poetry style created by Patricia Ann Farnsworth-Simpson, to honor poetess Dorian Petersen Potter (aka ladydp2000) It is an acrostic style of poem done with a 6 letter word to create 6 lines x 7 syllables thus 42 in all.The 2nd 4th and 6th lines must rhyme.As many verses as you wish with a 6 letter word.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/25/2015 2:42:00 PM

- Many great summer photos to your lovely poem, Dorian - Have a great week - hugs Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 5/26/2015 5:02:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Anne-Lise,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very much I appreciate it all my dear friend.You're very kind!So glad you think so about these pictures, some are more beautiful than others:)Wishing a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you!Hugs!:) D.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/24/2015 12:45:00 AM

I do enjoy the warm summer days, unless the humidity is high, then its not so comfortable... A very nice acrostic poem you've written here, Dorian and in a creative new form. Great work!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 5/25/2015 5:07:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Kelly,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very much I appreciate it all my dear friend.Youre very sweet! I know very well what you mean,I dislike the humidity the most too I just can't stand it:)Wishing a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you!Hugs!:) D.

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/23/2015 11:42:00 AM

Beautifully crafted with beautiful images. 7++, i feel. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 5/24/2015 3:44:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly BL,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very much appreciate it all,dear friend.Wishing you a very lovely Sunday!In his light!God bless you!:)D.

Cynthia Buhain-Baello

Date: 5/23/2015 4:18:00 AM

Interesting form and very creatively written, keeping the content intact and closing line are just perfect.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 5/25/2015 5:24:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Cynthia, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem!Very much appreciate it.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you!:) D.

Matthew Anish

Date: 5/22/2015 11:22:00 PM

Interesting work to mark the beginning of summer. Keep it up! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 5/25/2015 4:36:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Matthew for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very much appreciated.Wishing you a lovely week!In his light!God bless you!:)D.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/20/2015 5:21:00 PM

such a clever form and a lovely tribute to you - brilliant acrostic:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 5/24/2015 3:53:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Jan for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very much appreciate it all and the 7 dear friend.Wishing you a very lovely Sunday!In his light!God bless you!Hugs!:) D.