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Summer

The beach air had come to me With its refreshing yet breezy sensation The summer is just in the city Have the fun in the earth’s heaven Iced water and a bit of lemon, perhaps Please hold this for me, thank you The birds are building their nest Is it a wonder of something new? Pass the plain water trunk to me I will swim the entire sea today No, not to break a knee Nor a strut for that fine quay I wonder how an Olympic medallist dive Or how the cyclist ride It would a year maybe five To practice my coordination and sight The sunset had arrive Look at the colour it shows The swimmers had come to a take five The meaning only He knows

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Date: 5/1/2016 12:02:00 AM
Hi Abdu, It is truly wonderful. Well penned. I like ur way of writing.Enjoyed every stanza......hugs
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Abdu Muhaimin Hashim
Date: 5/1/2016 9:31:00 AM
thanks, my friend. :)
Date: 4/30/2016 2:13:00 PM
Nice poem my friend
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Date: 4/30/2016 11:53:00 AM
It is a wonderful poem in which hope lives beside sense and sensibility in good rhymes and rhythm. The bit of the hearts together:both author and the reader. Best regards.
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Abdu Muhaimin Hashim
Date: 5/1/2016 9:32:00 AM
sense and its characteristics are one of the fundamentals I used. thanks for stopping by
Date: 4/30/2016 10:55:00 AM
Abdu, finally I love reading a good one from a new poet... I do love the meaning only he knows... Summer. LINDA
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Abdu Muhaimin Hashim
Date: 5/1/2016 9:41:00 AM
glad you liked it, Linda.
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Abdu Muhaimin Hashim
Date: 5/1/2016 9:37:00 AM
great you like it :)

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