Summer

These cold days are long, Summer's around the corner; Blonde and beautiful.

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James Fraser

Date: 9/14/2009 12:31:00 PM

Blonde and beautiful doe's it for me, great Senyru>>James

Date: 2/17/2009 1:19:00 PM

Oh to be young. I got a chuckle out of this one. Living in North Dakota, I can attest to those long cold days. Nice perspective in this concise poem. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for taking time to comment on my haiku. Keep on writing! Karen

Daniel Neal

Date: 2/14/2009 7:31:00 PM

It is a funny poem, your mind is creative. DN

Chris Goombi

Date: 2/14/2009 7:26:00 PM

Ha ha ha...this one is a good one. I agree with you.

Danielle Moreno

Date: 2/14/2009 7:21:00 PM

Summer time is a great time, I can't wait for it............Danielle

Tyler Martin

Date: 2/14/2009 7:06:00 PM

Nice poem, I love the metaphoric use. Tyler

Sharon Winter

Date: 2/11/2009 6:45:00 AM

Aha! Double entendre here. Well done! Love, Shar

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 2/11/2009 4:11:00 AM

It took me a second to get, like Raul I though it was a haiku, but it's a clever senryu. Love E.

Arany P.

Date: 2/11/2009 1:51:00 AM

isn't it!! beautiful... senryu, my friend!! ~ Arany

Steve Edmonds

Date: 2/10/2009 9:28:00 PM

Summertime is hot, might need a cold drink with her.....the Chief

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/10/2009 7:04:00 PM

I agree with your senryu. I thought it was a haiku until I read it. It was funny, your clever mind never ceases to please. Nice work and watch out she'll get you in trouble...Raul