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Suicide

Triangle Squares and crooked lines Imagine this within the minds Of those confused and lost in a way I can't put in words I can't even say They were brought in this world for a reason I know Maybe to suffer maybe to show How lucky we are to be free from a state Of mental confusion Destruction high rate Suicide.....

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Date: 7/28/2014 10:38:00 AM
One wonders what goes on in the suicide's mind? God help me, I don't want to know. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 7/27/2014 5:50:00 PM
Ned, This happens to be an excellent poem, to have featured on the poetry soup's home page. Congratulations, enjoy having your poem featured this week. Always ~ LINDA ~
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Date: 7/26/2014 8:25:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Ned. I enjoyed reading this first poem you posted. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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Date: 7/26/2014 4:00:00 PM
Beautiful, inspirational write that I enjoyed reading! Best wishes.
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Date: 7/26/2014 9:41:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Ned :) - I choose your first deep written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/25/2014 8:54:00 PM
Hello Ned, I wish the world was free from it.. A deep poem my friend.... Linda
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