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Sudden Evil

In high school I was bullied by one kid... 
For three years he picked on me, 
made fun of me, 
and tried me on every possible occasion.... 
I am a peaceful man, 
a mediator, 
he took that as weak.... 
My senior year he tried me 
and I put my fist in his mouth, 
he fell back and I repeatedly stomped him until my boys pulled me off..... 
He wanted to fight me because his sister through herself at me 
during the Halloween party the night before. 
I took advantage,
like when lady Guinevere came to Lancelot..
I was Micheal Myers
she was a naughty school girl!!
I did it out of spite,
To provoke a fight.
I wanted to whoop his ass
I was playing football, 
in weight training, 
and hung with the thugs,
My brothers,
the streets were home!!!
I wanted to whoop his ass.
I hit him with a two piece with a biskit...

Jared Pickett

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  1. Date: 9/13/2010 1:26:00 PM
    Hey Bro. Sorry this comes late, but anyway, thnx for the kind comments on my write. Always appreciated....JMA

  1. Date: 8/1/2010 3:43:00 PM
    Well I try to be as 'perfect' as possible... oh u mean in writing.. well there too..haha.. appreciate your comments on my work... u are quite the perfectionist.. u did say u were a Libra right? cause u sure act like a Leo sometimes with the perfection..haha but in a GOOD way my darling.. happy Sunday ..with luv..

  1. Date: 7/7/2010 12:53:00 PM
    I can relate, a person can only take so much.

  1. Date: 7/6/2010 8:10:00 PM
    I understand this. A person can only take so much until he starts paying back people and giving them what they deserve. This is a wonderful way of telling your story and also a good way to teach a lesson and help some poor guy or girl who is being bullied. Thank you for helping us know what to do. Love to you my favorite poet. Scarlett

  1. Date: 7/4/2010 6:46:00 AM
    Great ...I was reading this wondering what was going to happen from the first line Loved it Sarah x

  1. Date: 7/3/2010 10:03:00 PM
    whoot whoot lol,, you showed that bully,, enjoyed...P.D.

  1. Date: 7/3/2010 8:05:00 PM
    Awesome ... I can just see your temper building from a slow burn to all out blaze.. not condoning the girl thing but hey she must not have been a sweetie either to give in so willingly.. how could anyone resist the Lone Wolf?? a great write with a happy ending I like to think.. enjoyed.. my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii .. on vacation.. AlohA...