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Success In Vain

They say,that,it was a great day, Friends were busy,with a kind of play. Only Maa was in great pain; But,she said it was in no vain. My parents held me in their hands, In the oblivion,the fate stands. They say I'm an answer to their prayer, But,somewhere was smiling the mankind slayer. I was the apple of their eyes. Beautiful was the place,I borned: Ugly was soon to be dawned. My sire' s lap was a place dear, Who knew that soon it will disappear. The dawn chorus soon turned; My beautiful place was burned. Sitting in the refugee camp And looking at the burning lamp, Wondering where is my sire' s lap; Where I used to sit with crowned cap. Maa once more keep your balmier hand, That held me for a dauntless stand. I lost my family and existence to the slayer, Tell me what was our fault?you bloody destroyer. The fountain and the bed of roses, Is now a place where my family blood oozes. The oblivious fate has arrived on date, Only to take away all,and nothing is left. Slayer fought,destroyer fought But why? My everything was lost! Do they really know why are they slaying? Because,I only see the innocent mankind dying. The beautiful family photo was framed, But you ugly destroyer got it maimed. Maa for you no vain was that labor pain. But,for me,without my family this life is in Vain. You win!slayer,at the cost of inflicted pain, But,alas!your success is totally in Vain. And,I was the apple of their eyes.

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Date: 10/4/2016 7:36:00 PM
Papri, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Papri Banerjee
Date: 10/17/2016 1:34:00 PM
Thank you,I'm also looking forward to nurture my passion for writing :-)
Date: 10/4/2016 6:38:00 AM
Superb....Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love
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Papri Banerjee
Date: 10/17/2016 1:35:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 10/4/2016 3:51:00 AM
Papri, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Papri Banerjee
Date: 10/17/2016 1:37:00 PM
Thank you for coming forward and giving an eye to my work and motivating me.looking forward surely :-)

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