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Substance Over Breath

With this tourniquet tort And an afternoon spent A half empty receptacle Is substance over breath. And when the wind blows Against blemish and reason I'll slightly dismember And re-curl with no recognition. A bitter sweet current Divides and it portions Although today i will love you Tomorrow may be without feeling.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/17/2009 1:47:00 PM
aaahhhhweeeebelwhooooshhhh! wow!!!! cool write Tony, really like it! oh yeaaaaa!!!!! Jim
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