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                                         When ever we're in the same room
                                         I always get a tingle down my spine
                                         It's like the smell of your perfume
                                         That always puts me on cloud nine
                                         You know like a flower you bloom
                                         And someone who really dose shine
                                         It's the way I feel when ever you loom
                                         I've never known anyone so sublime

                                         The way you make my heart go boom
                                         It's how you make me feel every time
                                         You have got me constantly immune
                                         I keep on wishing that you were mine

                                          When everythings doom and gloom
                                          You make everything seem just fine
                                           And you know your the one of whom
                                             I write these words so divine

                                       This is a follow up to one of a kind 1997
                            dedicated to the girl at mvc trying here I was to only use
                            two rhyming syllables this is what it felt like in her presence
                                                      And sublime she really was 


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  1. Date: 7/4/2013 2:16:00 PM
    Nice one! She would have melted if you had read it to her. Hehe. (: I really like your first poem on here. The rhyming is perfect and like Terry said, "full of feeling".. indeed! Awesome. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 12:52:00 PM
    Another one! Very nice... full of feeling... Terry

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 8:16:00 PM
    David, coming here to read your first poem on the soup... this has a very high tech beating of passion and love... enjoyed the is much divine.. like your ending...pd

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 2:27:00 PM
    excellent follow up poem David glad i dropped in

  1. Date: 3/20/2012 1:46:00 PM
    Welcome to P-Soup David, hope you will read, comments and write alot of poem. - Have a good poem week ! - hello: from Norway and Anne-Lise