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Seeing her is a vision His body relaxes; this is where he belongs Hearing her sweet voice He caresses her face He feels her move toward him, He can barely remain Her quivering breath, as she whispers his name He grabs the handles as he is sitting in his chair Smells of lavender, she tastes of wine He takes in the aroma, enjoying her flavor His senses on overload as he traces her spine Feeling her heartbeat, he is aware of his own Together their passion unite as one Something that cannot be undone. ©Holly Moore November 2012 "Inner Body Movement Contest"

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Date: 11/30/2012 4:24:00 PM
Very vivid imagery Holly, you've captured the blissful moment quite well, blessings Carl
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Date: 11/27/2012 1:03:00 AM
Holly outstanding write, it fills the brief completely, I love it..very well done...David
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Date: 11/26/2012 9:56:00 PM
Holly, very romantic,, the vision of one belonging... love this....pd
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Date: 11/26/2012 6:17:00 PM
Very hot n' sexy my dear holly, can't see my windows will all the fog... Lol Carma
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