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what I like about you is the indifference which penetrates me as deeply as contaminated nitrogen air my skin is filled with cries and every scream grows a wing my hair is like a crown tree flowering cherry I fly I learn to feel the air on the unexpected height of me you don’t see me even if I belly dance you see through me simple remembering non-existence I detach every night from unripe lips to one last poem which I dedicate to you but the words remain untouched not saying my name and I wait... any answer is like new breathing because I don’t breathe I refuse to breathe till you respond to me I breathe deeply in time with the 360 Grades I walk on the Tropic of Cancer equilibrium on a plan of seduction I would throw you to catch me and your hands like your lips are not found in this space and time I love your style.

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Date: 2/28/2013 5:52:00 PM
Outstanding, Daniela. Well done. Congrats. hugs, Ralph
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Daniela Voicu
Date: 2/28/2013 11:02:00 PM
Thank you so much, Ralph!
Date: 2/28/2013 6:36:00 AM
And I love your style!
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Daniela Voicu
Date: 2/28/2013 9:30:00 AM
Thank you so much,Michael!
Date: 2/27/2013 10:09:00 PM
Daniela,, an excellent poem, for my contest CONGRATULATIONS :-) Goodnight~ PD
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Daniela Voicu
Date: 2/27/2013 10:51:00 PM
Thank you! Good night!

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