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Stupid Cupid

You: Arrow Arrow-Cupid misplaced Pleased, I am To validate this man Basically: Pleasingly loved “Apple of my eyes” Heart-hanging from doves My lullaby I would take that bullet For you Sacrifice My all For this Make Him wane For us Now, am I but dust? That sea sluiced away. Shall on no account, again Cupid’s arrow stay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/8/2009 10:20:00 AM
Awesome! I Freaking Love This. Ohmigod! Lol Sorrii. I Just Got This Really Big Burst Of Energy But No This Really Is Good! Oh And Check Your Mail Lol. Peace! Boo
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Date: 5/27/2009 1:39:00 PM
I like the title, it is pretty catchy jojojo and the spacing of the poem, makes the reading like a tire-jumping game or a platformer like Super Mario 64 jojojojo thanks for the experience!!!=D
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Date: 5/20/2009 7:39:00 AM
You are my kind of guy! Yes! Love your humor and your very original style. Love, daver
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Date: 5/20/2009 7:35:00 AM
yes cupid is riding on the fence you have a way with words beautiful write look forward to reading more
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